Personal Statement Help needed please

Hello,
I am currently studying an access course at college and am now in the process of writing my personal statement for my ucas application and am hoping to get in to Univercity next year to study Physiotherapy.
Does anyone have any helpful tips for me or if possible would anyone mind having a look at it for me.
Many thanks,
Rachel

Go to thestudentroom website and there you can submit your PS and someone will critque it for you. I did that last year. Found it very helpful.

If you want to send it to be by PM I'll have a look.

I'm 1st yr Physio btw.