I just wanted to congratulate beazus on making such a good effort to document this case - thoughtful, orderly and informative. I won't comment on the content as you have got some good feedback already.
What a joy it would be if other students and therapists took the trouble when seeking feedback and advice
...the only thing one has to watch is the ethical and legal ramifications. In our country due to our goverments Health inormation Privacy Code we have to be very careful what information we post - it is quite restrictive and very easy to land ourselves in hot water. The key thing for us is if the patient, or a member of the public who knew the patient could possibly identify who the patient was then that would be a breach of the code.